hey you didn't put my grade in please do it and get back to me ASAP
What doesn't work?? NO caps, punctuation no greeting - hey is abrupt, casual , rude use Dear Mrs. McKoy, Hey /Good afternoon Mrs. McKoy demanding - ASAP, do it..implies that I have nothing else to do but serve your needs you didn't implies I did something wrong what's the assignment? See below for poorly constructed and thoughtfully constructed rewrites... Make sure to always create thoughtful, polite emails, and to edit them, before you hit send!
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